Not mind-blowing
It doesn't sound very good in my opinion. I'm not really sure why; it just doesn't sound good to me. I strongly dislike the melody. It almost seems annoying. Also, I'm not sure what you were trying to accomplish at 2:00, but it was straight up bad.
The drums are very boring and repetitive; honestly, it's essentially the same beat over and over. Also, it's not mixed perfectly. I'm not using headphones--I'm using high-end speakers--and it doesn't sound perfect, so that kid who gave it a 1, even though he's a jackass, kinda had a point about the mixing. (And whether you realize it or not it does have a resemblance to Canon in D.)
The good news is, though, this song could be useful to someone. It seems like it has to be put into context in order to appreciate it. And the synth solo was pretty decent.